4. 时态混乱

　　原：Although I have no work experience when I was a teenager, I always dreamed about having a job.

　　改：Although I had no work experience when I was a teenager, I always dreamed about having a job.

　　评：过去时的句子中冒出了现在时，太粗心了，要仔细检查。

　　原：I would explain my view in the following paragraphs.

　　改：I’d like to explain… / I will explain…

　　评：可能是两种说法记混了吧，结果把时态搞错了……

　　5. 主谓不一致

　　原：The way we deal with the environmental problems are crucial to the prosperity of human-being.

　　改：The way we deal with the environmental problems is crucial to the prosperity of human-being.

　　评：谓语之前有两个名词时，主谓搭配的问题就常常出现了。这里真正的主语应该是单数名词the way，所以与之搭配的谓语也应该是单数的is。

　　6. 重复累赘

　　原：From my point of view， I think this argument is quite limited since many other ways can also help learning a foreign country.

　　改：From my point of view, this argument is quite limited since many other ways can also help us learn a foreign country.

　　评：from my point of view和I think重复，保留一个就好。当然这里建议留下更“高级”的from my point of view.

　　原：There are the majority of people who deem that they like to spend money on things which can bring them long memory.

　　改：Majority of the people like to spend money on things that can be memorized for long.

　　评：中文句式说的“有很多人……”，但别一看到“有”就非要用there be句型不可，直接摆出主谓宾就行了。

　　“things that can be memorized for long”，被动语态明显更地道~

　　7. 中式英语

　　原：Thus, one is easier to draw bosses’ attention and gain appreciation.

　　改：Thus, it’s easier for you to draw bosses’ attention and gain appreciation.

　　评：中文习惯说“人们可以更容易地吸引老板的注意力”，而英语则习惯说“It’s easier for sb. to…”同学们要注意中英表述习惯的区别!

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