本文为大家整理了托福写作备考之需要避免的开头方式，便于考生托福备考。

　　1、托福作文中需要避免的开头方式—废话连篇

　　典型失败案例： Topic 1-Should college students beallowed to get married?

　　This topic is very interesting. I'm very interestedin talking about this topic. Because I'm also a collegestudent and I'm not married……

　　2、托福作文中需要避免的开头方式—中式英文

　　典型失败案例：

　　Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life

　　In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……

　　Topic 2- The population problem

　　The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers ofShanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.

　　3、托福作文中需要避免的开头方式—观点模糊

　　典型失败案例： Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

　　I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 17, and not married,so this topic is very difficult for me……

　　4、托福作文中需要避免的开头方式—偏离主题

　　典型失败案例：Topic-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications andquality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree ordisagree with the statement?

　　I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these importantqualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music tools, and etc. We can learnthese qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from manyplaces.

　　5、托福作文中需要避免的开头方式—语法错误

　　典型失败案例：Topic-If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility andalso be punished?

　　About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents are not right.Because teach child is parent's responsibility. So we also punish parents too besides children isalso should.

　　6、托福作文中需要避免的开头方式—过分简单

　　典型失败案例：Topic-The importance of environmental protection

　　This issue is surely very important, let's talk about it!

　　7、托福作文中需要避免的开头方式—意思重复

　　典型失败案例：Topic-Your opinion on DINK families

　　My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing.It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society.

　　8、托福作文中需要避免的开头方式—胡乱翻译

　　典型失败案例：Topic 1-Is it good to have a large family?

　　I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: “Manysons, many lucks”……

　　9、托福作文中需要避免的开头方式—观点武断

　　典型失败案例：Topic1-The importance of confidence

　　In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successfulpeople in the world are full of confidence. While those people who don't have confidence,they all have failed.

　　Topic 2 - The solution to the traffic problem

　　I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who don't obey the traffic rules,we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I'm sure there will be no traffic problemany more.

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