To sum up, the conclusion lacks credibility because the evidence cited in the analysis does not lend strong support to what the arguer maintains. To strengthen the argument the arguer would have to provide more evidence concerning that_____.

　　In conclusion, the arguer fails to _____. To strengthen the argument, the arguer would have to provide evidence that____. To better evaluate the argument, we need more information about that____.

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　　比较

　　1 Although the commonly-accepted belief/ idea is that XXX, a current/ recent study/ survey indicates that

　　2 It is true that XXX, but it does not mean that

　　原因

　　1 The reasons/ causes for XXX are varied/ complicated and perhaps (probably) that they lie in the fact

　　2 Another contributing factor/ cause of XXX is that

　　开头

　　1 There is a general/ public debate/ discussion nowadays on/ over the XXX. Those who criticize/ object to XXX argue that

　　2 They believe that XXX, however, people who advocate/ favor XXX argue that

　　结果

　　1 As it turns out / Indisputably/Accordingly

　　2 Considering all the factors above, we may safely draw the conclusion that

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