托福独立写作让步段的写法
2017-10-12编辑: 环球教育整理来自: 互联网
让步段2的示范
Visiting a museum is the best way to learn about a country.
Admittedly, paying a visit to a museum is of vital importance to learning about a country, for it provides the basic and systematic knowledge related to the country’s history to which we cannot be blind. However, to emphasize the importance of museums does not mean that other ways of getting to a country are of lesser importance. One who devotes himself to visiting museums without paying any attention to other ways stands a fair chance to lose sight of a country’s present magnificence, which is not an ideal case.
本题是一个多元素的题目,翻译过来就是 a>b a>c a>d ... a>n, 我们的立场是不同意,所以最好找两个不等式来证明他们是不成立的,比如:b>a c>a。我们可以写上网这个方式很好啊,另外交友也是一个不错的方式啊。让步承认博物馆有好处,可以让我们了解一个国家的历史,但是如果认为其他方式不如它重要的话很可能不能够了解国家现在的成就,这就不好了。这里面又出现了两个新的短语,lose sight of = be blind to 还有 be of lesser importance 跟 be of vital importance 正好相反。
让步段3
Do you agree or disagree: governments should spend more money in sponsoring arts than in athletics.
Admittedly, the significance of arts cannot be overlooked; building up an artistic atmosphere is conducive to refining people’s artistic taste. If a society is artistically cultivated, hardly would its people’s souls be corrupted by materialism. However, compared with arts, athletics is more fundamental, i.e., without good health, people will not be able to make any great achievements including those in the area of arts. Thus, the vital importance of athletics is self-evident.
本题是一个两元素的题目,两个元素分别是艺术和体育,a>b。而本题的立场是支持 b>a。所以文章的结构是 b1+ b2+ a+。让步的时候依然是 a+ b+ 的结构。这里面涉及到的比较不错的表达有:the significance of a cannot be overlooked, be conducive to, the vital importance of b is self-evident, 以及倒装句 hardly would its people's souls be corrupted by materialism。
让步段3的示范
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People who have learned many different skills are more likely to succeed than those who focus on learning only one skill. [2014年2月22日]
Admittedly, the significance of being versatile cannot be overlooked since it is conducive to increasing one’s competitive advantage in the workplace. If an individual has multiple skills, hardly would he or she be outstripped by others. However, compared with learning a variety of skills, zeroing in on one skill is more fundamental without which people will not be able to make any great achievements. Thus, the vital importance of concentrating on one skill is self-evident.
本题也是一个两元素的题目,我们只要将模板中的相应位置进行合理的替换即可。替换的时候尽量用一些同义词或者短语来避免重复。本段中也有几个不错的表达,比如:increase one's competitive advantage 以及 be outstripped by = be eclipsed by 还有 zero in on = focus on等等。
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